Her Prophet Blathers About Re-Writes [XV]
Nov. 20th, 2014 01:44 pm![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png)
[see The State of The Explanation 2.0 for context]
~I was just reading through Part Four: “Building a New Matriarchy – Grand Strategy” and I realized that the thing actually works 'as is'...which brought up the dilemma of what to do about the required “critiquing and expounding upon the work of four of the most important Writers and Thinkers of Second Wave Feminism” etc. To stick all that into Part Four could actually distract and even derail the 'narrative thrust'. It IS some pretty heavy intellectual lifting, which is a big part of why I've been 'stuck'.
But it came to me rather quickly; stick all that epistemological blather in Part Eight” “Summation”. It does need to be related to provide greater depth to the overall context, but putting it at the 'tail [tale?] end' allows it to processed after said overall context has been more or less absorbed.
I'm so smart. *smirk*
~I was just reading through Part Four: “Building a New Matriarchy – Grand Strategy” and I realized that the thing actually works 'as is'...which brought up the dilemma of what to do about the required “critiquing and expounding upon the work of four of the most important Writers and Thinkers of Second Wave Feminism” etc. To stick all that into Part Four could actually distract and even derail the 'narrative thrust'. It IS some pretty heavy intellectual lifting, which is a big part of why I've been 'stuck'.
But it came to me rather quickly; stick all that epistemological blather in Part Eight” “Summation”. It does need to be related to provide greater depth to the overall context, but putting it at the 'tail [tale?] end' allows it to processed after said overall context has been more or less absorbed.
I'm so smart. *smirk*